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PostSubject: Nakataka clan   Sun Jun 21, 2009 12:30 am

Name: Nakataka Clan

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Drawbacks: This KKG must be activated before any use of it. This clan will die out from OVEREXTENDING THEIR BODY AND OVERUSE OF HIS KKG. This KKG only last 10 post.

Kekkei Gekkei: Viricual Cell

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Last edited by Aries on Sat Jul 04, 2009 11:52 am; edited 6 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Sun Jun 21, 2009 12:55 am

Your KKG is a no unless you make it have some weakness.
1st: You are not immune to poison.

2nd: There needs to be an activation to these cells, not an all the time jutsu. Maybe the KKG can be active for five posts, and then a two or three post cool down before the next use.

3rd: The first jutsu is not E ranked, make it D.

4th: for the second jutsu, if it lessons it by 20%, then you could render an opponent useless in five hits, thats hardly D rank. Make It B.

5th:With the third one, make it if they are hit strait on three times...

6th: with the Ekirei no Jutsu, make it two posts... But if in your post your character does things that would take time, post length goes down...

7th: You are aware that these jutsu cannot all be had by you at your genin rank, and they still count in your jutsu limit...
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Sun Jun 21, 2009 1:24 am

ok finished

but why a weakness this KKG can't really have a weakness

Kimimoro didn't have a weakness

the Uchiha don't have weakness

Rinneagan doesn't have weakness at all(way OP...lol)

none of the clans with kkg in naruto really have a weakness
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Sun Jun 21, 2009 1:37 am

WRONG
MAJOR WRONG
ABSOLUTELY WRONG

Kimimaro and ALL the Kaguya die a LOT quicker. Kimimaro was only 48 when he died from OVEREXTENDING HIS BODY AND OVERUSE OF HIS KKG.

Rinnegan, yes they were OP, but they're weakness was that it would leave those who overused it.

And Sharingan caused Blindness
NOW FIX YOUR KKG
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Sun Jun 21, 2009 2:00 am

done
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Sun Jun 21, 2009 8:12 am

lol mino...
be more gentle XD
But its true, Kimimaru died early...
The rinningan can be countered by blocking the vision of the others, and making it just like a normal set of eyes. And we have yet to see just how much strain it puts on his body...
And sharingan, well yes, blindness.
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Sun Jun 21, 2009 8:21 am

Mure no Jutsu needs to become C, because its the same thing as the touching chakra drain.

Soiki Souhou no Jutsu has to have an effect on the user as well, loosing that many cells from the body would not only out great strain on it, but as a more immidiate effect, make it weaker.

For all the jutsu which have to do with allowing your cells to travel from your body, they would not last long mingled with the thousands of cell of the air, and cells already live for a short period, so those jutsu need to die off fast, and can be stopped with another jutsu such a fire ball, or something which would kill the cells.
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Sun Aug 02, 2009 2:17 am

done

sorry ii was inactive BTW
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Sun Aug 02, 2009 11:59 am

Glad to have you back...
And, here is the thing...
I am accepting your KKG, but if i see it being OP in any way, I am going to bring it back here, and make you edit it ok?
So just dont be OP...
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Mon Aug 03, 2009 2:23 pm

got it
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:59 pm

Hold the Phone!

If this clan's cells are virus like and toxic to others, how on earth do they reproduce? Sex would introduce them straight into their partner's body!

Sorry about that, but the Fridge logic there needed to be answered...
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Mon Aug 03, 2009 7:51 pm

I know it sounds nasty but we keep it in the family.....lol

and thier are very few of us
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Mon Aug 03, 2009 8:15 pm

So they can't reproduce with someone who isn't part of the clan?

Hmm...

That sounds less like a clan and more like an entirely new species!

Fennikkusu FTW! (Fennikkusu are the species I came up with for this site, so yeah...)

Wait! More fridge logic!

Viruses aren't actually classified as living things! They have no DNA, and are actually sort of hostile strands of protein. So if your going like that, this clan would be more bacteria-like, or parasitic fungus-like than virus-like.

Damn it Xelloss, stop bringing up fridge logic! Just ignore it!
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PostSubject: Re: Nakataka clan   Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:02 pm

xelloss...
i forget if i did,
but until i make you mod, You have no authority to post on character apps...
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